Comments on: (2.3) The Day I Sold My Soul For Two Pence

By: daymon

daymon — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 21:04:52 +0000

All kinds of bad vibes are coming off that man. But the will to live if only to get back at those that hurt him is to strong.

By: Miladysa

Miladysa — Sun, 30 Nov 2008 22:29:28 +0000

You definitely feel the air of evil reading this.

“There was no doubt in Dmitri’s mind that his mother cried in her grave. Something was tugging in his soul, begging him not to step forward on this path.” *shiver*

For what it is worth I wouldn’t beat yourself up about each post - even though I do Just go with the flow and write. Once you have something down your can go back and edit edit edit any time. I just spent two weeks doing that. I think if you angst too much you stop writing.

OK - I’ll shut up and buzz of now …

By: Grimm

Grimm — Sat, 29 Nov 2008 21:27:11 +0000

Yes, I know it’s short. (Extremely so) But after several re-writes, and constantly trying to develop the proper plot flow I decided to give you this as a consolation. Hopefully I’ll direct the story on the correct path soon. Apologies.

Now I must take Edict of Instinct into the backyard and find a switch to teach it not to be so frustrating. brb.